Change in Excerpt 1 due to a recommendation of a reader
I have decided to make a change based on a suggestion of a reader. Here is the change: The men and boys wore caps or slouch hats. They were tanned and most had long, dark, oily hair. Take a look at the passage in the first blog and see if you like the change.
Alchemist Gift – “Roland! Hey sleepy head, come on, it’s past eight thirty.” Liz stood at the foot of the bed and made little crab pinches at Roland’s foot that stuck out from under the covers.
Roland looked up and pulled his foot in. “Oh, it’s you.” He laid his head back down on the pillow and closed his eyes. Read more